Thursday, March 31, 2016

IPROUD 1

My Best Learning
I am proud of this because I put lots of effort into it and I think I put my personal best in to it. My biggest challenge was thinking of ideas to write down because I had to try hard to remember.


The Bamboo forest


There are a jumble of loud rowdy children in the bamboo forest. The bamboo forest is exciting but sometimes a little dangerous. Out of nowhere you can hear bamboo stick breaking, trees waving and children howling.


The bamboo forest is a fun area to play in because you can pretend to be a survivor. The bamboo forest is fun because you get to explore places you haven’t been to before, and get to climb trees whenever you want. In the bamboo forest you can get stick and pretend to fight like it was the end of the world. The bamboo forest has lots of cool secret spots for you to make bases in.


In the bamboo forest you can hear lots of noises everywhere. You can hear car driving past, birds singing there nice songs, Bamboo sticks shaking and sticks falling to the ground.


The bamboo forest feels round, wooden, smooth, spocky.

The bamboo forest is a fun area to play in. Make sure you go to Camp Omatua and play in the bamboo forest.


4 comments:

  1. grate post. I like how you added lots of detail

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  2. Wow Mitch keep up the good work :)

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  3. That is a great piece of writing Mitch! :)

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